The Greatest Poem in the WORLD....G!!!
The sun
The sun is the source
the start of all religion
the reason for conflicting:
The crusades, jihad
yet it tries to kill sin
Each religion seeks victory in this holy war
My Lord is greater than yours
more omnipotent, godlier
It justified murder
for paradise and survival
but at their core
they are contain
a singularity of morals
So forget the subtle differences
and think the possibilities
if we all just agreed
The Greatester Poem in the World.....H!!!
The twin towers fall
like panic at the disco
dance on in the fight
The grounded tiwns wail
with America mourning
our children, fallen
2 comments:
I thought this poem was really interesting. I liked it because you said what you wanted to say in a way that makes people think and ask questions
the first poem is about putting differences aside and learning to get along as one and respect eachother and eachothers differences. the strongest line is "So forget the subtle differences
and think the possibilities" because it states what the original poem is about loud and clear. The part about the sun in the very beginning could be changed a little, or tied in more to the whole put aside the differences thing because right now it is kind of a loose end.
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